Beginning a Manuscript ~ A CATHOLIC GIRL
A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM - manuscript 1
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
The bell rang ……….. RINGGGGGGG!
And as I ruffled all of my notes from Calculus AP Class and
got my books in my backpack, I was struggling to get up with a torn ligament on
my left foot. How did I get into this despicable
state of a cast to be worn with mortification for six weeks and with no way to
get to class without having to walk all across campus to get to Spanish AP.
“Hi, Mercy.” And he
has a huge smile on his face.
“How can you be so joyous, as I suffer with this declaration
of paralysis?!?”
“Here, let me help you.”
As he lifts my arm up and I am suddenly flying out the door with no
paralysis and I don’t feel a moment of the discomfort and I am not at all
tempted to be as grouchy as I would have been for having to carry the burden of
debilitation.
Who shall I say is this friend that brings me up, when he
knows when I need it. And so as I wobble
with my cast and crutches and he shares with me his plans for the weekend, I am
distracted from the inconvenience of getting through the corridors without
running into him and as he in his energetic person becomes apparent to me, he
suddenly asks me a question that catches me off-guard.
And as I am just a few feet away from my Spanish AP
classroom, he asks me,
“Are there reasons for you to consider the person for coming
with them to a very important event?”
…… and I look at him and I am caught a bit tongue-tied…. And
I just say, “Why?”
“I want to know your reasons for coming with me to prom.”
….. and ….. the bell rings and I just look at him and say, “I
need to get to class, thank you for your help.”
And he walks me to the door and runs to the classroom next
door for his French AP class.
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As I wobble into class distracted from his question, I am
thinking of his question and asking myself a series of thoughts of where I would tell
him and the reason I would tell him and just tell him, “Okay, I will go with
you.” And then I said to myself, how did it come to him asking for a reason, when he never really asked me to go.
My father was aware of my senior year being a very important
part of our family, as the oldest daughter of four children being the first to
graduate High School, and although he had seen Joseph around when we had our
club meetings, I hadn’t really thought about him as a person who would even
want to attend an event like a school dance.
Although, I did like the idea, I didn’t really think about who I would
go with. And I think, my parents and
grandmother would say, “Yes, he can take you.”
I am not the type to even attend a school function like a
dance, but amidst the idea of it being a last year and a senior at that, I am a
bit glad that I already have someone asking me.
And besides, when the time comes perhaps we won’t think about it so
early in advance.
We were at the middle of the school year, and a thousand
exams to study for and applications for the University, it was kind of nice to
know someone had thought of me.
“Conjugate and Translate, Mercy.”
….. and as I answer Mr. Narez’s assigned task, I have this
huge smile on my face and my friend Rachel looks at me and whispers, “tell me.”
….. “we’ll talk after class.”
And during the break, Rachel hurriedly asks me, “What was
Joseph talking to you about before class?”
“Joseph wants to go to the prom and he asked me to go with
him and I didn’t really answer him.”
“Go with him, Mercy, and we’ll ask if a group of us can plan
together.”
“Okay, I’ll talk to him about what he was thinking of and we’ll
talk later.”
…. And as soon as the bell rang…. And as I struggled with my
books, there was Joseph and a huge smile on his face. And I said, “Well, you certainly are
brightening my day as I wobble around.”
And Rachel smiled and walked along with us to our next
class.
We were quite a prestigious group of adolescent teenagers
and did not comply with what the generation of society tells teens of MTV or next
Top Model series. We spoke
against Health Education Class and wrote a petition against the Education Board
providing contraception as healthcare for teens and opted out in taking the
class with parental permission to receive the credit in a more dignified class
to fulfill the requirement. And this was
well-received by the School Board and made an impact on a lot of the students
on our identity of senior class-men. And
Joseph seemed to become more a friend to me ever since this class petition and
I would see him now and then around school, until this sudden interest in me
this afternoon.
As Rachel walked to the next building, and Joseph and I had
the next English Literature AP class together, I waved to Rachel and Joseph was
still blabbing about what was going to happen with him and his family this
coming weekend.
“Mercy, my mom is having a family get-together and I
wondered what you would think if I invited you.”
“…..this weekend?”
“Mercy, just stop by next door, your grandmother already
knows about it.”
“Wow, Joseph, why are you suddenly being so here with me?”
And then the bell rings again……… RINGGGGG!
And English Literature is on the
topic of discussion.
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As Mrs. Kyrk talks about the next paper due on our (book of
the week). And I am thinking of all of
the assignments we have to do this weekend and I don’t know how to tell him
that I will be there. And I look across
the classroom and he’s looking at the board writing the notes down with an
intense attention to the present moment of the task and I smile and say to
myself, “I think this will be a wonderful weekend.”
And as the day was ready to come to an end and we were
assured of the time factor being enough preparation for an assignment well
accomplished, I wobbled outside of class and found myself and Joseph talking
about what he was thinking of for the prom and what he thought of in planning a
group together for the evening. And so
we began to share what we were hoping to see for this once-in-a lifetime event
and he sounded excited to share with me that he appreciated all of the insights
I brought in class today about the book of the week and wanted to know if I
would work with him at the library after school and write the assignment
together and opt on a partner assignment.
And suddenly, I realized Joseph had become more than a friend
to me and yet, he didn’t really answer my question about the group for
prom. And I ….
“Mercy, I’ll have to go to practice this evening after the
library and I wondered if you would be able to see me come play tomorrow.”
“Joseph, did you ask me to go to the prom with you?”
“I did, Mercy, and when you asked me what I would like to do
for the evening, I agreed with you.”
“I can go to the prom with you, but I don’t know if I can go
to your game tomorrow, you know how I don’t understand the game.”
“My parents are planning to be there, Mercy.”
“That’s wonderful, however, I have a really big exam I need
to study for.
And I
have a Mock Trial to practice for with Robert.
And I
am a Prosecution Attorney, this year, and it’s a bigger role to play this year.
I hope
this doesn’t ruin your plans, Joseph?”
“I must be overwhelming you, Mercy.”
“I am a bit surprised by your assumption that I would go to
the prom with you, and you didn’t really ask me, but told me I was going with
you.”
“You’re right, Mercy, I am sorry I assumed and didn’t really
ask.”
“Rachel and I wanted to make it a group, and if you like the
idea, then I think it will work out.”
“Sounds good, Mercy, and we’ll touch base some more as the
event gets closer.”
“Great, I will be working on another assignment that’s due
tomorrow and will take a rain-check on the partner assignment for English
Literature?”
“Very well, Mercy, we’ll schedule this for another day.”
“I’ll see you later, then.”
“Have a good day, Mercy.”
And I wobble home with a lot of a full day has to offer for
a Catholic Girl on her senior year of high school.
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A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM - Manuscript 2
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
My first day of High School was a distance from what I had longed
for as a person who had finally entered into a stage when I knew every decision
I made would determine my future.
And as I had always dreamed that someday, I would meet
someone who would love me, I did not know when or how this would happen.
I am a walking distance from a brand New High School and was
glad to see such a stately new building ready for me to walk into the doors of
a public school that I would make my mark in.
And if God would destine me to meet him here, He would tell me in His
own time and own plan for my heart and destiny.
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There was Joseph, my classmate from Junior High, whom I had
grown familiar with as we would team for the Spelling Bee Contest and I enjoyed
how he would make me laugh when it was the bell of the bees to spell every word
just in time before the buzzzzzzz…….
I was glad to see his funny face again at a High School, which
I was still getting my familiarity with and his playfulness made the High
School a place I knew would be the next four years of what God would instore
for my hopes of what I would become. And
as a student with high academic honors from a Junior High that set my footsteps
ready for these next four years, the stage was much bigger and the characters I
would meet anew would place the promise of my future destiny at place.
“Joseph, are you enjoying your classes?”
“Mercy, the principal has already asked me to be a prominent
speaker for the Council of our school and she asked me to find someone to work
with in getting this school ready and founded with what this Alma Mater will
entail.”
“What are your plans, Joseph?”
“I was hoping you would help me.”
“Well, I have a memory of what we had to do at my elementary
school and what we did in choosing a school mascot and the colors, but I don’t
recall an Alma Mater.”
“Would you be willing to work by my side in the School
Council, Mercy?”
“I would like that, Joseph, perhaps this may be my way of
contributing in the first foundations of the school……. Can you imagine, this
could be historical…… I mean, it IS a significant time to be the first classmen
of this High School…… don’t you agree.”
“I wouldn’t find any other person who would stand by my side
in getting the footworks started, Mercy.”
“When’s the first meeting, Joseph?”
“Well, I have already chosen my President, now I am going to
need your help in finding the other council members and I thought maybe you
could list some candidates and I will share with you a list of my favorable
friends who would make this a great effort for everyone.”
“Sounds ….. “
“Do you need some help today after school in getting the
banner for the First Council meeting?”
“Maybe this is how we can determine which one of the
candidates would be a great fit for our council, what if we ask the list of
people we have in mind to meet after school to make the banner and then the two
of us can see what we come up with………do you think today is enough notice for
everyone to help?”
“You’re right, Mercy, we need to give the people a heads up
and enough notice for them to be a part of the meeting.”
“Great, so the First Council will be making a banner and we’ll
schedule it for next week.”
“I’ll give the list of people to you, tomorrow and we can
talk about it then.”
“Have a good day and I’ll see
you then.
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“I would only see it as a blessing, if this is where God finds his desires fulfilled in me in attending this University.”
“What would make you wonder if perhaps God may be calling you to find another way in this journey?”
“What would you wonder?”
“Mercy, would you consider a celebration as a door?”
“A celebration is always a celebration for a reason.”
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CATHOLIC GIRL
& PROM – Manuscript 5
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
When a Catholic Girl receives a Sacrament and the Sacrament is received in the state of the quality of the state, do I as a young lady respond to the dignity of this state? I am a Confirmed Roman Catholic and this Seal on my head, has determined a lot of my decisions in high school. And this action of grace from the Sacrament, instituted by Christ, directs my path in all aspects of my life.
So Prom Nights are not essentially a dilemma for me as a young lady in adolescence. And it shouldn’t be a dilemma for me as a young lady. It is an enjoyable evening. And we go all out for the evening to enjoy comradery and friendship with peers we have learned to become the human beings we are.
So when I am
before the face of God and before the face of who I AM, will I find myself
disgusted to grace I received in the Sacrament?
No.
I have a free will.
“There were some people in my class talking about something that made me really uncomfortable.”
(hug, hug)……OFF TO CLASS!
A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM – Manuscript 6
“Who went to the prom?”
“I did, and I was surprised to see Mercy there.”
“Mercy went to the prom?”
“Yeah, she was with the list of people who were on the committee.”
“Wow, I didn’t realize Mercy went.”
“Who’d she go with?”
“Rachel was with her the whole time, I don’t know?”
“That’s great, I hope they had a good time.”
“Yeah, they did and I don’t know what she thought of it.”
“Ask her.”
“Mercy, I heard you were at the prom……. What’d you think of it?”
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“Hi, Rachel.”
“Hi, Mercy.”
“What’s the matter?”
"……. I’m sorry to hear that.”
“Mercy, how could they think they have a heart after finding this appropriate for their body?”
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“Lee, who’s that guy with the other guy?”
“Mercy, is there a reason why you are upset with me?”
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A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM – Manuscript 3
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
The best day had finally come of my last
year of the very prominent time of my high school endeavors, and what did I
know when in my moment of dissent, there was an ascent and the heights of this
jubilation became evident when my parents told me Joseph had a surprise for me
and wanted to enhance the expectation as they kissed me on the forehead before
I was off to school.
I knew Joseph since junior high when we
were chosen to represent the School Spelling Bee for the Unified School
District and when he and I would drive to the school event, his parents would
drive the two of us as we practiced and memorized all of the words in the dictionary
from A to Z. And when we won second
place for our Junior High, everyone knew that the first place was always with
him.
“Veneration ……… V – E – N- E – R – A –
T- I – O – N”
“Magnificent…….. M – A – G – N – I – F –
I – C – E – N – T”
“Romanesque……. R – O – M – A – N – E – S
– Q – U – E”
Where are the words and what are the
defining moments, as I remember the day when my parents told me that someday I
will be loved by a very good man and how they prepared me for this was their
guard for me and my heart. When I found
myself enjoying another human being and freely being with this person with the
love of his parents and my parents loving him and the whole family aware there
was something happening and yet, a distance was free enough for the two
individuals to become who they are meant to be; I knew when the day would come
we would be fully ready. What do we as
individuals ask for in life? A life of
magnificent veneration for a Romanesque architectural beauty? What we build in our lives is this distance
of what we long for as human beings and the distance is at the grasp of every
heart who is guarded by love of family and parents who care for them.
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I was so pleased, when on this day I
returned to my usual place in class and there at my desk was Joseph with a smile
I will photograph into my being as the reason why my heart was light and
promising that day I began my day and the embrace of my parents left me. And I knew there was something significant
about this human being that only God would reveal to me and somehow envelope in
me as the reason I am and the meaning of who I am. Joseph always seemed to know when to be there
for me and this did not at all affect my friendships with other human beings. In fact, there was a respectable distance to
allow the two of us to develop into the human beings we are now.
And he always knew the right moment to
come to me amidst our friends and peers.
“Mercy, I have
a sister and she needs you to come over to the house to help with the party.”
I knew he had a sister and brothers, but
amidst our academics he never talked to me much about them outside of our
responsibilities in the academics. “I am
so sorry, I wanted to let you know today, Joseph, that I would not be able to
be there.”
“Mercy,
I thought we discussed how you were needed for this feast.”
“We
didn’t discuss much, Joseph, an individual doesn’t just come over like they
have never met eachother and I have never even met your siblings.”
“My
parents are expecting you, Mercy.”
“Please
convey to them that the invitation is wonderful of them to think of me,
however, my parents and I are unable to attend.”
“Mercy,
I will let them know and thank you for giving me the fine decline.”
“Sure,
Joseph, see you later.”
I knew from then on, the person of whom
my heart was inclined to would be someone who knew how to ask me and when to
ask me and where to ask me and this was where my friends come into the providential
plan of circumstance.
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Jeff
had known about Joseph coming to the school game asking about me and also knew
there were no formal promises to anyone.
We never showed any intentions that was apparent to any person that
something was between me and any young man outside of an academic
relationship. And so my friends were
apparent, when they noticed Joseph was seemingly in my presence more often than
usual. And so people found this as a
question to whether there were developments occurring.
“Hi,
Jeff.”
“Mercy,
I wondered if you thought about prom.”
“Not
really, too many things to take care of…”
“Mercy,
I wondered if you would consider going with me.”
“Sure,
I’ll think about it and talk to my family about it.”
“Great,
I’ll see you and let me know what your parents say.”
“I’ll
let you know, and I’ll see you at Calculus.”
~~~~~~~~~
So here I am at English Literature and I
am reading my favorite part and climax when the discussion on, Of Mice and
Men, begins to rile up the whole class in a heated discourse on how men
should never come forth so strongly with any woman. And how a mouse who speaks forth never is a
man. “It sounds like two idiot
individuals who were in a barn alone and didn’t know how to see things in the
light of decency and grace.”
“What
would you suggest these two characters are saying about human beings, Mercy?”
“Ignorance
is bliss……?”
And
the whole class roars with ……. A disgusted laughter.
“It’s
evident these two individuals had no capacity in learning the knowledge.”
“What
do you mean, they both knew there were proper ways to care for themselves….. I
mean look at how he would take care of the
mouse and pet it.”
“Yeah,
in a stalkish way.”
“I
would say that in order for any human being to know a capacity of decency and
reverence towards any human being, there would
need to be a well-grounded family and it is very evident that these two
individuals did not have parents who loved them and perhaps, were a distance of love for any person
for not caring for their child.”
“Well,
he was a dumbo who never had a mother.”
“….and
she was a prey to his stupidity.”
“Class,
we are going to continue this discussion and what you have reflected on will be
an essay question for your upcoming exam and I expect your insights on this
topic to be a discourse for a future group assignment.”
……..
and the whole class groans….. amidst another addition of tests and exams.
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“Mercy, what was Joseph talking to you
about in class last period?”
“Rachel, he wanted to ask me to go to
the prom, but he came across too strongly and so I just told him no to some
party he asked me to help his family with.”
“I am sorry, Mercy, I thought he would
have been more respectful.”
“Well, I won’t be seeing him around, I
told him strongly.”
“Mercy, what are you going to do for
lunch later?
“I have to finish a project and I am
going to Mrs. Kyrk’s classroom to work on it after I have my lunch.”
“I’ll be at the cafeteria and meet you
there.”
“Okay, see you later.”
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A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM – manuscript 4
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
Does a young woman know when there are moments of essential and
divine matters in the workings of her heart attuned to the Heart of a GOOD
MAN? As I remember all of the
intensities of love, I have only seen one so gracious as when a young man sees
God and loves Him and ONLY HIM!
There are hearts so distant from this lifetime and hearts that desire so much more. Here are moments when a young woman desires a heart consumed for love, and how her heart is in union with a God who loves her, will be a working of His Divine Hand speaking for her and guiding her towards Him and ONLY HIM!
There are hearts so distant from this lifetime and hearts that desire so much more. Here are moments when a young woman desires a heart consumed for love, and how her heart is in union with a God who loves her, will be a working of His Divine Hand speaking for her and guiding her towards Him and ONLY HIM!
I was saluted this morning from the captain of the basketball team as
he walked on by and as I saw only a friendly face, I knew the desire of my
heart would never be satisfied unless he spoke to me as a Bridegroom made of
HEARTS attuned to Heaven. And so it was………
Amidst the list
of consuming possibilities during my senior year, there was only one direction
in which I knew my heart would follow and where this would lead me would be a
young man who knew where and how he would come forth like a new rising for
Heaven and only Heaven. I was
considering a doctorate of young hearts, as I watched my siblings find their
satisfaction with their peers and as I watched them find their enjoyment in
this, I neither wondered nor consumed my heart in their associations.
“Hi Mercy.”
“Hi Joseph, how are you?”
“Hi Joseph, how are you?”
“My parents found
you at the school alone waiting for someone and they wanted me to know if you
needed a ride home or something."
“No, thank you,
Joseph, my parents are here, I am waiting for them and that’s why I am alone.”
“I hope
everything is going well with you, during this last year of high school?”
“I got my
acceptance letter for the University of Notre Dame, and have a scholarship
waiting for me, that’s why my parents are at this meeting. They wanted me to wait outside as they
discussed some financial matters and felt it was better for me to not be
present.”
“That sounds
like an opportunity and a blessing.”
“I would only see it as a blessing, if this is where God finds his desires fulfilled in me in attending this University.”
“What would make you wonder if perhaps God may be calling you to find another way in this journey?”
“What would you wonder?”
“Well, my family
and I are attending a celebration this coming month and I have seriously
considered a reason for a possibility outside of this realm.”
“I know when
this is brought forth, I am certain a possibility will no longer a possibility
if I don’t answer it now. And what I
only know at this present is an open door to a University that holds a faith
that I treasure.”
“Mercy, would you consider a celebration as a door?”
“A celebration is always a celebration for a reason.”
“I would like to
ask you to come with me to this celebration, Mercy.”
“I am not
forthright enough, to stand by your side in attending this celebration, I’m
sorry.”
“Forthright is
not the question here, Mercy, the providence of a hand is being offered to you
at your grasp.”
“Shall I say,
yes and trust that your confidence in me is well received even by you?”
“I would receive
your yes with a foretold and accept your trust in me as a sign.”
And Notre Dame walked on by.
“Mom and Dad,
this is Joseph and his parents would like to invite the family to a
celebration."
“Joseph, we know
your family and we have heard about the celebration.”
“Mercy is being
requested to be present at this celebration and her confidence in me has
brought forth a great significance in the eyes of many.”
“We are very
proud of Mercy and would be honored to be there, Joseph.”
“Awesome, we’ll
be sure to be in contact.”
“I believe Mercy
will be fine and where she is going will be seen by many.”
“I agree, Mr.
and Mrs. Laury, and we will be sure the celebration is completed.”
“Well, I’ll
leave you to your family, Mercy and we’ll be in touch.”
“Sounds good,
Joseph, see you J”
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
When a Catholic Girl receives a Sacrament and the Sacrament is received in the state of the quality of the state, do I as a young lady respond to the dignity of this state? I am a Confirmed Roman Catholic and this Seal on my head, has determined a lot of my decisions in high school. And this action of grace from the Sacrament, instituted by Christ, directs my path in all aspects of my life.
So Prom Nights are not essentially a dilemma for me as a young lady in adolescence. And it shouldn’t be a dilemma for me as a young lady. It is an enjoyable evening. And we go all out for the evening to enjoy comradery and friendship with peers we have learned to become the human beings we are.
No.
I have a free will.
What if in my
free will, my intellect is darkened by eternal distinct acts from people or individuals
around my vicinity as with attending a public high school, will this affect my
free will? Will the cardinal virtues of
fortitude, prudence, temperance and justice and the theological virtue of faith,
hope and charity take its course in every act of free will?
The constancy of my decisions will come to a point. And if in my inconstancy I face a decision so determined to go against my dignity as a human being; there will be a distinct role of my family and those who love me to remain with me.
The constancy of my decisions will come to a point. And if in my inconstancy I face a decision so determined to go against my dignity as a human being; there will be a distinct role of my family and those who love me to remain with me.
“Hi, Rachel.”
“Mercy, are
there people asking you about prom?”
Not really, why?”
Not really, why?”
“There were some people in my class talking about something that made me really uncomfortable.”
“Rachel, are
you aware that there are teen pregnancies in our school?”
“My parents won’t let me go.”
“My parents won’t let me go.”
“I’m sorry to
hear that, is there a specific relationship that is causing your parents to
caution you?”
“The people I overheard in my class were talking about things that I don’t feel ready to do.”
“The people I overheard in my class were talking about things that I don’t feel ready to do.”
“And teen
pregnancies mean their ready?!?!!????”
“Mercy, when is a pregnancy ever ready?”
“Mercy, when is a pregnancy ever ready?”
“For one thing,
we need a mom and dad with obligatory responsibilities to care for a child, and
do you really believe any of us have this properly ordered?”
“I can barely pass this exam.”
“I can barely pass this exam.”
"Seriously,
Rachel, those people are not thinking straight.
And if your family won’t let you enjoy an evening with good friends
because of those people, then that’s their love for your dignity.”
“Are you going, Mercy?”
“I am
And believe me, Rachel, I want to enjoy myself and get the dress and look nice for a very good evening.”
"Thank you, Mercy, I will mention to my parents you plan on going and if they know you’re going, they’ll give me their blessing.”
“Great, Rachel…..
we’ll talk more.”“Are you going, Mercy?”
“I am
And believe me, Rachel, I want to enjoy myself and get the dress and look nice for a very good evening.”
"Thank you, Mercy, I will mention to my parents you plan on going and if they know you’re going, they’ll give me their blessing.”
(hug, hug)……OFF TO CLASS!
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By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
“Who went to the prom?”
"I didn’t.”
“I did, and I was surprised to see Mercy there.”
“Mercy went to the prom?”
“Yeah, she was with the list of people who were on the committee.”
“Wow, I didn’t realize Mercy went.”
“Who’d she go with?”
“Rachel was with her the whole time, I don’t know?”
“That’s great, I hope they had a good time.”
“Yeah, they did and I don’t know what she thought of it.”
“Ask her.”
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“Mercy, I heard you were at the prom……. What’d you think of it?”
“I went.”
“What did you think of it?”
“It was not as elegant as I had hoped it would be for dressing up so
extravagantly.”
“Did you dance with anyone?”
“I danced and we sat and talked with the people around our group.”
“Did you guys get a limo and go all out?”
“No, we carpooled and met at a nice restaurant and drove to the
dance.”
“Would you call it a memorable night?”
“We took pictures.”
“Can I see?”
“Sure…. I don’t have it with me, though.”
“Okay, Mercy, …..well, I wanted to know what you thought of it.”
“Are you glad you went?”
“It was okay, and to dress up and the excitement of it all was more
of a climax.”
“Thanks, Mercy.”
“Sure. J”
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A CATHOLIC GIRL &
PROM – Manuscript 7
By Meryl Viola Bravo,
M.A.“Hi, Rachel.”
“Hi, Mercy.”
“What’s the matter?”
“Nothing…… those girls I
was telling you about went to the prom and did what they were talking about.”
"……. I’m sorry to hear that.”
“Mercy, how could they think they have a heart after finding this appropriate for their body?”
“Were they laughing or
crying?”
“They were talking about
it like it was so ……..”
“I’m sorry to hear the
difficulty.”
“My parents would never
forgive me if I did anything that would cause them to lose confidence in me.”
“There are families who
don’t see this and actually find this a turning point for their kids.”
“I think that’s
disgusting and they aren’t a family.”
“I agree.”
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CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM - Manuscript 8
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
“Where are you?”
“I’m right here, Jeff.”
“Mercy, are you my partner or
aren’t you?”
“Let’s dance.”
So when it came to the point
as I sat across from him at the dinner table amidst the group and all of us
knew there would be a point, it was made clear that as young men and women we
are to listen to one another. And Jeff
heard me. And I heard Jeff. We were here for a dance. And he was my dance partner. And I was his.
When is the point disfigured
and the heart is no longer heard?
When outward forces make a
simple dance more than a dance, you know man and woman have been bombarded by a
lie. For what God has created is in His
Creation a knowledge. The nature of man
and woman are to be one. And what Mercy
heard that evening, was what Jeff also heard.
A dance.
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A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM –
Manuscript 9
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
“Mercy and I planned the whole
evening and the group agrees for the safety of everyone and the trust we have
in our friendship, we will stick to the rules of the game.”
“What rules?”
“Some guys were talking about
getting some beer and had a big brother who was willing to get it for us.”
“When did big brother become
big brother?”
“What the hell?!!!!”
“Mercy, the girls and I were
thinking…….”
“I’m sorry, I don’t know you,
and Rachel and I already made plans.”
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A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM – Manuscript 10
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
“I don’t know…..”
“Lee, they look like…..”
“I don’t know (agitated)."
“They say those guys are going to the
prom.”
“………. L”
“I don’t know if I could go …… with them
dancing next to me.”
“Can we do something about it, without
sounding like bigots?”
“Bigots?”
“We’re not disrespecting anyone…. A bigot
speaks like a bully.”
“What we’re doing is requiring a descent
amount of dignity at the evening of our senior event of the year!”
“And…… there is no decency in allowing
such behavior.”
“Well, how do you find their behavior
descentless?”
“Well, if I saw a boy and girl having
sex in the bathroom at the prom that would be just as indecent as a guy and a
guy dancing in the middle of the dance floor with their arms around eachother.”
“Well, the law right now tells people no
one has a gender.”
“I would ask for a right of privacy.”
“……. What do you mean?”
“I have never been exposed to that type
of interaction and it’s a violation to me in being exposed to such indecency.”
“To them it’s not indecent.”
“Well, to me it is and it’s not fair to
any of us if we miss prom just because they can’t keep their relationship
private.”
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A CATHOLIC GIRL & PROM – Manuscript 11
By Meryl Viola Bravo, M.A.
“I am finding people asking about you and me being more than
just friends and the presumption is making me feel uncomfortable.”
“I’m sorry, and I will remain more of just a friend who isn’t
around so much.”
“Thanks, J.”
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